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  • 2018年雅思写作母题库》

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    Online shopping is now replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?

     

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    题型:influence

    Analyze the influence of …

     

    首段(基本版本):

    In many countries, buying products online has become a mainstream activity. While some people have concerns towards this trend, I think that it leads to several desirable results.

     

    首段(进阶版本):

    New technologies, and in particular the Internet, are undoubtedly having a major impact on the way that goods and services are bought and sold. 具象思维In many countries, buying products online has become a mainstream activity. In general, I think that it leads to several desirable results.

     

    立论段一:

    The development of online shopping has meant that the Internet has become a world-wide retail market: exotic foods, art works, rare books, adventure holidays and the list is endless.  

     

    Products that were once only available to a few people living in big cities can now be bought by those living in small towns.

     

    立论段二:

    Additionally, buyers can have more control over the process.

     

    Price comparison websites make it easier to find bargains.

     

    Shopping can be done at any time of the day or night, and shoppers can browse for the product as long as they like without pressure from sale assistants. This means that shoppers can potentially become more astute and knowledgeable about the products that they are buying.

     

    Because of the greater competition involved in trading within a large market, sellers may have to improve the quality of their products.

     

    让步段:

    However, that is not to say that shopping online brings about no problems.


    One of the biggest concerns is safety.


    With the increasing virus threats and well-trained hackers, online deals are well exposed to all kinds of risks and losses, for example, the wide-spread problem of identity theft.


    So when making the most of the desirable changes brought by technology, we should be aware of its potential downsides and find a way to minimize the negative impacts of them.

     

    结尾段:

    Therefore, experience suggests that online shopping has transformed modern life. Consumers today not only have wider access to goods but also have greater access to information and more control over how they shop.


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