本文内容摘自《2019考研英语高分写作》，王江涛编著，群言出版社，2018年3月。个人资料，仅供参考。转载请注明出处！
Directions:
Write an essay based on the following chart in your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments
You should write about 150 words.
预测范文
As can be seen from the above bar chart, money value of annual global electronic commerce transactions is increasing gradually during the 15 years. In 1997, it is almost 2 billion dollars, while the number reached 90 billion in 2005. By 2011, the number jumped dramatically to 300 billion dollars, 150 times than that of 1997.
Why is electronic commerce booming nowadays? Several causes contribute to this phenomenon. Above all, the availability of computer is the foremost cause and the rapid development of information technology enables everybody to have access to computer and Internet. Nowadays, Internet is nolonger a stranger to common people. What is more, the Internet technology is becoming increasingly mature. People who at first do not trust business transactions on Internet now become convinced that doing business on web isextremely convenient and effective. Last but not least, electronic commerce is the fastest way so far to make transactions across far distance. It makes it possible to do business at home and it saves time and unnecessary formalities as well. That is why it is preferable to traditional commerce.
The booming electronic commerce undoubtedly contributes to the prosperity of world economy and it also gives birth to SOHO, a special group of people working at home. The trend towards apromising e-commerce is inevitable.Accordingly, let’s get prepared to embrace this irretrievable tendency.
参考译文
由上图可见，在过去十五年中，全球电子商务成交额正快速稳步增长。1997年，全球电子商务成交额约为20亿元，而2005年数据增长到900亿美元。2011年数据迅猛增长到3000亿美元，是1997年的150倍。
为什么当今的电子商务发展如此之快呢？这一现象产生的原因有几个方面。首先，电脑的普及是最主要的原因。电脑技术的快速发展使每个人都能接触到电脑和互联网。现在，互联网对普通人来说已不再陌生了。其次，互联网技术正日趋成熟，起初不相信网上商业交易的人们，现在已开始相信网上做生意既方便又有效。最后，电子商务是目前远距离交易最快的方法，是它使在家做生意成为可能，还节省了时间和不必要的手续。这就是为什么电子商务比非电子商务更受青睐的原因。
快速发展的电子商务无疑为世界经济繁荣做出了贡献，由此也产生了SOHO这种在家工作的特殊人群。电子商务的大有可为之势不可避免。因此，让我们准备好迎接这一不可逆转的趋势吧。
亮点词汇
bar chart柱状图 annual每年的 global全球的 transaction交易 gradually逐渐 billion十亿 dollar美元 jump增长 dramatically急剧地 time倍数 boom急速发展 nowadays现在 cause原因 contribute to促成 phenomenon现象 above all首先 availability普及 foremost最重要的 rapid迅速的 information technology信息技术 enable使能够 have access to接触 Internet互联网 no longer不再 stranger陌生 common people普通人 what is more此外 mature成熟的 at first首先 trust信任 convince信服 on web在线 extremely非常 convenient方便的 effective有效的 last but not least最后 way方式 so far迄今为止 far distance远距离 unnecessary不必要的 formality手续 as well也 preferable更好的 traditional传统的 undoubtedly毫无疑问 prosperity繁荣 give birth to造成 SOHO在家办公 special特殊的 group群体 trend趋势 promising光明的 e-commerce电子商务 inevitable不可避免的 accordingly因此 embrace拥抱 irretrievable不可逆转的 tendency趋势
道长点评
考研写作历史上已经多次考察图表作文这一题型，例如1997年真题“世界烟草总产量”、1999年真题“美国人口增长导致野生动物减少”、2010年英语（二）真题“手机用户”、2011年英语（二）真题“汽车”、2012年英语（二）真题“工作满意度”、2013年英语（二）真题“某高校学生的兼职情况”。
经典句型
Directions:
Write an essay based on the following chart in your writing, you should
interpret the chart, and
give your comments
You should write about 150 words.
预测范文
The column chart reveals market size of web game in China from the first quarter of 2010 to the second quarter of 2011. During the period of one and a half years, there has been a sudden jump from RMB 520 million to 820 million, a rise of 300 million, at the year-on-year growth rate of more than 50%.
When computer’s entertaining function is highly spoken of, such a problem does deserve our serious concern. First and foremost, the most serious harm of Internet games come from their contents, which affect children’s mental fitness.The majority of games involve violence, such as fighting and killing. To win or kill their opponents, children are permitted to use all various means like guns, knives and bombs. When they are enjoying the pleasure of success, a violent turn of mind is developed and rooted in them, which may induce future violent behavior in their real life. What is more, being indulged in Internet games also does harm to children’s physical health. The radiation from the computer can arouse many uncomfortable feeling, like a headache, poor eyesight and even losing hair.Being lack of sleep and dinner, children are more inclined to get irritable and suffer from severe malnutrition.
Of course, it is not the end of the story. Being indulged in Internet games also affects children’s study, and their communication with others. All these facts indicate that it is time for us to manage Internet games by the whole society.
参考译文
上述柱状图揭示了2010年第一季度至2011年第二季度中国网页游戏市场规模。在此一年半之间，从5.2亿元急剧上升到8.2亿元，增长了3亿元，同比增长率超出50%。
当大家都盛赞电脑的娱乐功能时，这个问题确实值得我们认真关注。首先，网络游戏最严重的危害来自于其内容，影响了孩子们的心理健康。大多数游戏涉及，例如打斗和。为了获胜或杀死对手孩子们允许使用枪、刀、炸弹等各种手段。当他们享受过程的快乐之时，他们萌生了思想并变得根深蒂固。此外，沉迷于网络游戏也会损害孩子们的生理健康。电脑辐射能够引起很多不适反应，例如头疼、视力下降甚至掉头发。孩子们废寝忘食，更容易生气并导致严重的营养不良。
当然，事情不止如此。沉迷于网络游戏也能影响孩子们的学习以及与他人的沟通能力。所有这些事实证明我们整个社会早就该控制网络游戏了。
column chart柱状图 reveal描述 web game网页游戏 quarter季度 sudden急剧的 jump增长 million百万 year-on-year同比 growth rate增长率 entertaining娱乐的 function功能 highly高度地 speak of赞扬 deserve值得 serious concern严肃关注 first and foremost首先 harm危害 Internet games网络游戏 content内容 affect影响 the majority of大多数 involve涉及 violence opponent对手 permit允许 means方式 gun枪 bomb炸弹 pleasure快乐 violent的 root扎根 induce引起 behavior行为 what is more此外 do harm to危害 physical health生理健康 radiation辐射 arouse引起 uncomfortable不适的 feeling反应 headache头疼 poor eyesight视力下降 be inclined to容易 irritable暴怒的 suffer from遭受 severe严重的 malnutrition营养不良 of course当然 communication沟通 indicate证明 manage控制
道长点评
考研写作结构第二个方面：评分标准，有三大评分标准：一是关联词，即过渡性词语，一般小作文使用3-5个左右，大作文使用5-7个左右；二是同义替换，词汇及句子结构最好进行同义替换，一个词汇或句子结构最好不要反复使用；三是代词替换，可以使用代词尤其是物称代词来替代名词、短语或句子。
经典句型
● 2019考研英语（一）小作文终极预测（上）
● 2019考研英语（一）小作文终极预测（中）
● 2019考研英语（一）大作文终极预测（上）
● 2019考研英语（一）大作文终极预测（中）
● 2019考研英语（二）小作文终极预测（上）
● 2019考研英语（二）小作文终极预测（中）
● 2019考研英语（二）大作文终极预测（上）
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