剑9

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and并列宾语从句 that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

 

Solution题型

 

极端不成立法则：

best

具象思维：

other measures

 

sports facilities—easy-to-reach local sports centers/stadium etc.

facilities 不等于equipment

 

议论文转换题目的陈述方式，但写作任务一致，文章结构、内容不变:

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 一个观点的讨论

 

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 两个观点的讨论

 

议论文有选择、有侧重的逻辑结构

首段：

讨论对象引入句(1-2)+中心观点

主体段立论:

分论点一+拓展

分论点二+拓展

主体段驳论/让步:

分析对立面+再次声明自己观点的正确性

尾段：

总结(+简短补充或升华)

主体段立论段和让步段顺序可灵活调整，注意措辞即可。

 

首段:

参考答案一

A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general public题目讨论对象，with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.

One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities题目讨论对象 to encourage a more active lifestyle.

Generally, I think that it takes more efforts to address this issue.

 

参考答案二

It is easy to notice that the health level of the general public today is declining rapidly题目讨论对象.

While尽管 some people might think the best way to tackle this problem is to increase the number of sports facilities题目讨论对象, I tend to hold a different opinion.

 

参考答案三

How to improve the health level of the general public has been a major concern to many.

While尽管 some people might think the best way to tackle this problem is to increase the number of sports facilities题目讨论对象, I tend to hold a different opinion.

 

主体段结构:

驳论/让步

Some people think that the best solution is to... 

... ...

But this solution has some obvious limitations, because it might be only attractive to those who are already fit and leading a healthy lifestyle, not those who most need it.

 

立论:

However, there certainly are better ways of addressing this problem.

Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing more sports equipment in public places...

A more effective solution should be toimpose high tax penalties on征收税务罚款high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol. ... Healthy lifestyle should be better introduced to the general public to ....

 

结尾段:

To conclude, focusing on sports facilities is a narrow approach and并列谓语would not have the desired results.

Other important measures should be adopted as well.

 

说明文：

The health level of the general public is decreasing dramatically. How to change the situation?

 

首段：

... This essay will demonstrate some possible/potential to tackle this problem.

主体段:

采取递进式引出解决方案

One possible solution should be ...

Another way to handle the issue could be ...

A more effective approach might be ... 

结尾：

Overall,...

 

剑八

Increasingthe price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic andpollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

Increasing the price of petrol动名词

thebest way极端不成立法则(审题+驳论段写作)

solution题型

 

Increasing theprice of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree ordisagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

剑8Test3

写作任务同上

 

第一段：开门见山直接引出讨论，即日益增长的交通及带来的污染问题已经成了较严重的问题，同时表明观点，即仅仅增加汽油的价格是无法解决问题的。

第二段：让步，指出私家车的使用虽然是问题的关键，但随即表明增加汽油的价格会同时影响到公共交通，所以不是最佳解决方案，并且引出下文。驳论段

第三段：提出清洁能源的使用是有效的解决方案。立论段一

第四段：更进一步表明增加公共交通工具的选择是更有效的方法。立论段二

第五段：总结文章讨论：长期有效地解决交通及污染问题关键在于鼓励人们要多使用公共交通工具，并呼吁政府加大对公交系统的建设。

 

首段：

There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, bothin cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.

 

驳论段：

While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long. As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads. But there are various other measures that could be implemented and that would have a huge effect on these problems.

be (more) likely to dosth = tend do

be less likely to dosth

be unlikely to do sth

 

结构句式：

While it is undeniable that ..., ... is/are unlikely to alleviate the situation for long. 尽管...肯定起到作用，但是...不太可能长期缓解这一局势。...But there are various other measures that could be implemented and that would have a huge effect on these problems.平行对称句式

be implemented被执行

 

立论段：

I think to tackle the problem of pollution cleaner fuels need to be developed. The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to use. Persuading manufacturers and travellers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective strategy for improving air quality, especially in cities.

 

However, traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle people can use. To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travellers. For example, if sufficient sky trains and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced. Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own car for long journeys. 具象思维

 

结尾段：

In conclusion, I think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating the public to use public transport more, and on governments using public money to construct and run efficient systems.

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